@wiki_me @vk6flab In response to your comment, I made these changes to my draft:
2.5 YOU are:
A) The legal entity exercising RESTRICTED RIGHTS under these terms.
B) any other legal entities in which the entity of part A holds
5% ownership or greater or equivalent control without ownership
C) Any legal entity with 5% or more ownership in the entity of part A
or equivalent control without ownership.
(continued)